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Beho_123 asked 4 years ago

This is my short essay  
last year , I went to a place that is very beautiful and peaceful . Weather at there is awesome. I am very impressed by many great scenes . I hope that I will go to that place again in future 

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Kaneie replied 4 years ago

You do not want a comma after year, it should be more like this: “Last year I went to a place that is very beautiful and peaceful. Weather there is awesome and I am very impressed by many of the great scenes. I hope I will be able to travel there again in the future.” This is one thing I still have somewhat of an issue with. I am a native speaker but the commas are still a little confusing for me haha.

Oleksii replied 4 years ago

Last year I went to a place that was [sequence of tenses] very beautiful and peaceful. The weather there was awesome [it was awsome when you were there. you don’t know what is the weather like there now, because you are not there at this very moment]. I was very impressed by many great scenes. I hope that I will go to that place again in the future.
Like that I think. Well hope that my help was helpful.

Godlovesus replied 4 years ago

Last year I went to a very beautiful and peaceful place. The weather there is awesome. I am very amazed by beautiful scenery. I hope that by the willl of God I can visit this place again in the future.

Anna replied 4 years ago

Last year I visited a very beautiful and peaceful place. The weather was awesome. I was greatly impressed by its charming landscape. I wish and hope to visit this place again in future.

Beho_123 replied 4 years ago

Thank for all responses!

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chayal Staff answered 4 years ago

@Kaneie and @Kaneie great responses!

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