Working togetherCategory: CorrectionSongwriting blablabla…
Ivan Crane asked 7 years ago

Hi everyone! I’ll Be very grateful if someone can check this out (in reference to grammar of course=)).
Here it is:

Have no tears in my eyesores
Just pus flowing down,
Crossing space of the death row
Wearing the thorny crown.
Doomed to ongoing agony
Having no gap to hide,
Cause the walls in my head
Soon come true into life..
 
Stand forgotten and weak
On the edge of realm.
World is rotten. I’m sick
Of this messing around.
I will see brightness no more
And shine left my shrine.
Only thing I’m praying for
It is the end of the time…
 
Absolute… blindness and infirmity.
Disconnexion and silence in infinity.
Thoughts like gray array i wish to slay
And Forgot.
World was broken Into smithereens,
Now i’m nought…
 
Blind!!!
Blind!!!
Blind absolutely!!!
Scums!
I’m here!
Why you’re watching me?
Help me to die!!!…
Please,
Rest me in peace,
Anyone!!!…
Why
All of you set me aside?

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