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    Kate
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    I’ll be very glad if you can help me!
    It was my hometask to translate from Russian into English. I know that you might not understand it but i don’t know how to correct the mistakes.

    Struggle for the equal right
    If you ask people even with level historical education when women from Russia had got suffrage, I doubt that the answer will be correct. This fact is reflected in the history textbooks, neither a school level, nor a university level. / (This fact is not reflected in the history textbooks, a school level, a university level.) The most common reply to this question is that Soviet Rower provided all the rights to women.
    The key actor in the process of introducing universal suffrage to women was Russian feminist movement which Provisional Government gave in and adopted relevant legislation.
    On the 15th of April, 1917 Provisional Government adopted the document about “The Production elections of city council”, about the precinct of urban governance” on/of which electoral rights had been established by persons of both genders, aged 20-year-old, without distinction of nationality and religion. And in September 1917 Russian female acquired the right to vote and to be in/to the Supreme Legislative Body of the its country is Constituent Assembly.
    In fact, by November 1917 women acquired the right to pursue a profession,
    to residence, to receive education, to dissolve a marriage as well as right to equal pay with men for equal work. Finally, equality of political and civil rights of women with men was enshrined by Constitution of RSFSR 1918 in article 64.
    Russia ended up in the first five countries of the world by providing women with the right to vote and to be elected to the country’s Representative bodies. (units). The right to vote was given to women of New Zeland in 1893, Australia in 1894. Equal voting rights with men were provided women at territory of Europe in Grand Duchy of Finland of the Russian Empire in 1906 in Norway – in 1913, in Denmark in 1915, in the USA in 1919, in England in 1928, in France and Italy in 1945, in Grees in 1956, in Switzerland in 1917. So far/ Still women are denied of suffrage in a number of countries.

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    peter0900
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    Professional editors or proofreaders are often hired to fix errors and enhance the quality of written text.
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