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Beho_123 asked 4 years ago
  1. Nowadays , our environment is in danger because of the fumes , smokes , carbon dioxide ,…ect . Currently, many sicknesses are increasing day by day , you know , our environment is our life . If the environment is too dirty for us to live , we would be dead . We can\’t even control the gabage that we threw away every day . This is what I kind very bad . So why ? . A single person can’t be blamed for that . Therefore , we must together solve this problem . Switching off lamp , computer or anything that we don\’t use . Taking the gabage to the designed areas . Protecting the environment to give our children a better life . 
Mervana replied 4 years ago

i think it is better to use diseases instead of sicknesses and it should be as you know not you know , Polluted is also better than dirty

Beho_123 replied 4 years ago

Thanks

Romeitho Andrade replied 4 years ago

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1 Answers
magnolia answered 4 years ago

Nowadays, our environment is in danger because of fumes, smoke, carbon dioxide, etc.  More and more people are getting sick every day.  Our environment is our life.  If the environment gets too dirty, we will not be able to surviveWe can’t even control the garbage that we throw away every day.  A single person can’t be blamed for or fix everythingTherefore, we must work together to solve the problems.  People can help by switching off lamps, computers or anything that they are not using and taking garbage to designated areasWe must protect our environment to give our children a better life.
*etc. = abbreviation for et cetera  
*There is no space between the last letter of a word and any necessary punctuation mark.  Only one punctuation mark is used at the end of a sentence.
*you know, so why?– conversational and unnecessary
*currently = nowadays
*This is what I kind very bad<– I am not sure what this means. Perhaps- I think this is very bad.
*throw- Use the simple present tense when you are writing about something that is routine or habitual (like something someone does every day).
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Switching off lamp , computer or anything that we don\’t use .<– This is not a complete sentence. 
Taking the gabage to the designed areas .<– This is not a complete sentence.
Protecting the environment to give our children a better life .<– This is not a complete sentence. 
*can’t, don’t – Only an apostrophe is used in contractions.
 

Beho_123 replied 4 years ago

Thanks

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