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Beho_123 asked 4 years ago

In  Vietnam, from April to July ,  the weather is very hot . Therefore, my family decided to travel somewhere that is more comfortable and we visited Bà Nà Hills . It is located in Da Nang . At first, we had to get the car cable to reach at Bà Nà Hills . It is awesome . Weather there is very cold and comfortable . It has many beautiful flowers . People also took a photo and enjoy fresh air at there . I think if you have a long holiday , you should visit it once time in your life . You will remember it along your life . 

Oanh Lam replied 4 years ago

welcome to VietNam again

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Amelia Erzi answered 4 years ago

In Vietnam, from April to July,  the weather is very hot . My family decided to travel somewhere that is more comfortable, so we visited Bà Nà Hills. It is located in Da Nang . First, we had to make the car ready to go to Bà Nà Hills. It is awesome. Weather there is very cool and comfortable. It has many beautiful flowers . People also take pictures and enjoy the fresh air there. If you have a long holiday, you should visit it some time in your life. You will remember it all your life. 

Just a few errors. You’re doing really well! Keep up the good work!
~Amelia

Beho_123 replied 4 years ago

Thank you very much

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